| 以下是我的中译英,请给个宝贵意见,翻译得怎么样?哪里存在什么问题?多谢! 原文:-
与额度控制和担保管理系统的额度接口 额度管理的联机部分分为五个管理层次：（机构层，群体层，客户层，账户层，交易层）
下级层额度受控于上级层总额度。每层可有多个客户多个产品，每个客户的各种产品受控于客户总额。额度使用次数分为单次使用，循环使用。
客户如果需要在银行办理贷款、透支业务时，首先要在担保管理系统中记录其担保的信息，如担保为何，价值多少等，还要登记在银行中***允许的贷款金额、透支金额。当客户具体办理一笔贷款或透支时，就要调用额度接口程序在额度管理系统中记录该笔交易的贷款金额、透支金额为何，总的贷款金额、透支金额是多少，检查有没有超过***允许的贷款金额、透支金额，同时系统自动检查和登记对担保价值的使用。这就是额度的使用。当客户归还一笔贷款或透支时，要调用额度接口程序在额度管理系统中记录该笔交易的贷款金额、透支金额为何，总的贷款金额、透支金额减去归还的该笔贷款或透支金额。同时系统自动扣减对担保价值的使用。这就是额度的释放。如果给定的贷款金额、透支金额允许重复使用，则客户还可使用已归还的额度。否则，客户不可以再使用已归还的额度。同样，如果客户的担保的价值允许重复使用，则客户还可使用已归还的担保价值。否则，客户不可以再使用已归担保价值。 译文:-
The Quota Interface between the Quota Control and the Guarantee Management System The jointing-machine-part of quota management is divided into 5 management levels : the institution level, the group level, the customer level, the account level and the exchange level.
The quota of lower level is controlled by the total quota of upper level. There are many customers and products in every level, every product of each customer is controlled by the total customers’ sum. The times of quota usage are divided into single usage and cyclic usage.
The customers must firstly record their guaranteed information in the guarantee management system, for instance, why they need to be guaranteed and how much the value is etc if they need to handle(apply for) the loan and overdrawing business in the bank, they are also required to register the maximum loan amount and the maximum overdrawing amount those have been permitted in the bank. When the customers specifically handle one loan or overdrawing, it requires to operate the Quota Interface procedure and record how much the loan amount is, how much the overdrawing is, how much the total loan amount is and how much the total overdrawing amount is in this deal, and check if these exceed the permitted maximum loan amount and the permitted maximum overdrawing amount or not in the quota management system, meanwhile, the system will automatically check and register about how the guaranteed value is used. This is the quota’s usage. When the customers repay one loan or overdrawing, it needs to operate the Quota Interface to record how much the loan amount is, how much the overdrawing amount is in this deal, and the repaid loan amount or overdrawing amount shall be minus from the total loan amount and the total overdrawing amount. In the same time, the system will automatically deduct the usage of value that have been guaranteed. This is quota’s release. If the loan amount and overdrawing amount ordered can be allowed to use repeatedly, the customers may also use the quota that has been repaid. Otherwise the customers can not use again the repaid quota. Same, if the customers’ guaranteed value is permitted to use repeatedly, they may also use the guaranteed value that has been repaid. Otherwise the customers can not use again the guaranteed value that has been repaid.
上面那个"联机部分"应该怎么翻译才好?等等.候复!
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