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1楼 leiyongjun
等级:小学生
发帖数:18
回帖数:25
|  发帖时间 - 2005/3/31 15:40:15
| dear sir:
nice to contact with you!
first of all ,please kindly allow me to introduce meself and our comany to you. i am lee, a world trade sale of Free Free industrial corp,our company boasts the very first manufcaturer of acrylic products in taiwan ,established in *域名隐藏* more than 20 years developing,our products line include airtight canister,bathroomware,tabletopware,stainless steel ware,and so *域名隐藏* have oun designers and one factory in *域名隐藏* we have opened two factories in mainland china ,one is abr and another is prairie(i work for),taking advantage of taiwan's international design and lower labor expense in mainland. we offer our customers good quality and competitive price products .that is why we have more and more customers spreaded as far as morth and south america ,europe ,japan ,the middle east asia ect. all of them keep long ,aggreeable business relationship with us .and due to our excellent ability in produce acrylic products,we can do oem project for cuzzi ,which is regarded as the best acrylic company in europe .
i have sent you some of my product catalogue to you .
please note the attached *域名隐藏* you want to get more information about our products ,please contact me directly.
if you have any requiry ,please do not hesitate to contact with us .we will do our best to serve you ,hopefully we can open a new page for our business relationship.
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2楼 leiyongjun
等级:小学生
发帖数:18
回帖数:25
| 发帖时间 - 2005/3/31 15:42:03
| 不號意思 ，我在一家台資公司，沒有簡體中文啦。很痛苦地 ，大家遷就一下吧
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3楼 leiyongjun
等级:小学生
发帖数:18
回帖数:25
| 发帖时间 - 2005/3/31 15:44:23
| 不好意思，我在一家台資公司上班，沒有簡體中文地，真地 很痛苦，大家將就一下吧
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4楼 刀郎
等级:博士生
发帖数:2
回帖数:1250
| 发帖时间 - 2005/3/31 16:19:37
| | 大概看了一下,个人觉得有以下要改,另外请注意大小写,段落,复数，还有些单词写错,请自己再检查~ word trade: international trade for more than...........developing: after more than...........developments opened two factories: built two factories i work for: for which i work taking advantage of: by taking advantage of labor expense: labor cost
excellent ability in produce :excellent power in producing
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5楼 leiyongjun
等级:小学生
发帖数:18
回帖数:25
| 发帖时间 - 2005/3/31 16:46:07
| thank you for you kindly advice ,
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6楼 brooktit97
等级:初中生
发帖数:11
回帖数:189
| 发帖时间 - 2005/3/31 17:32:11
| 尽量用WE 少用I .
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7楼 charliehan
等级:初中生
发帖数:19
回帖数:107
| 发帖时间 - 2005/4/1 10:37:45
| 没有必要写这么多， 很***AILS都是在以后的联系时给的， 看这么长的英文头痛
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