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1楼 amity5000
等级:初中生
发帖数:43
回帖数:76
|  发帖时间 - 2005/8/18 8:52:19
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感谢贵司一直以来的鼎力支持与配合！贵司的通力支持与高素质的服务促使我们的项目顺利进行,客户给予我们高度的评价,随着订单的增加 ,产品市场的不断扩大,我们希望在未来的合作中得到您一如既往地支持，在货款结算方式方面，为方便财务统计结算,我们希望贵司承诺能以月结60天的方式结算，真诚地希望能尽快得到您的答复！
Dear Sir or Madam,
We herewith would like to show our thanks to all suppliers’ great support and full cooperation in the previously time. We really appreciate it. Based on your great support and hi-quality service, we could process the project smoothly and high-praised by our clients. With the demand increasing and marketing extending, your always support is especially important in the future. We would like to request you could accept payment terms of 60days credit for all future orders, so that to convenient both of us to short the payment frequency. Please do not hesitate to contact us if you have any better suggestions. Thank you for your great support in advance.
Sincerely,
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2楼 connie0409
等级:博士后
发帖数:13
回帖数:2141
| 发帖时间 - 2005/8/18 9:09:19
| 请问,这是写给中国人的还是外国人的?
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3楼 frankqs
等级:小学生
发帖数:1
回帖数:36
| 发帖时间 - 2005/8/18 11:04:13
| 我也是个新手，看了楼主的翻译感觉功底很深啊，佩服！有些地方提出偶的小小意见，和楼主探讨下，呵呵 to all suppliers’好象太泛了，不知 to your ，怎样？
we could process the project smoothly and high-praised by our clients 似乎应为
we could process the project smoothly and get high-praised by our clients 真诚地希望能尽快得到您的答复 we are sincerely awaiting your earliest reply, OR please give us your reply as soon as possible,
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4楼 amity5000
等级:初中生
发帖数:43
回帖数:76
| 发帖时间 - 2005/8/18 12:30:45
| 谢谢三楼,您的建议不错.
To 二楼:是要写给国外的.
大虾们,还有什么建议的吗?
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5楼 抵制日货
等级:大专生
发帖数:0
回帖数:451
| 发帖时间 - 2005/8/18 13:14:55
| Dear Sir or Madam,
We herewith would like to show(express) our thanks to all suppliers’ great support and full cooperation in the previously time(during the past period). We really appreciate it. Based on your great support and hi-quality service, we could process the project smoothly and high-praised by our clients. With the demand increasing and marketing extending, your always support is especially important in the future. We would like to request you could(to) accept payment terms of 60days credit for all future orders, so that to convenient(to bring convenience for) both of us to short(shorten) the payment frequency. Please do not hesitate to contact us if you have any better suggestions. Thank you for your great support in advance.
Sincerely,
括号里面我建议改的和修改的，请自己参考！
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