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1楼 russ110
等级:小学生
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|  发帖时间 - 2006/8/3 9:59:08
| | Dear *域名隐藏* :
It was exciting to see your company’s demonstration in the website of you company . I got a great impact from your company. We are writing to enquire whether you would be willing to establish business relations with us.
We, Laya Chemical Co., Ltd., have been in the field of making aerosol cans and doing contract filling for near 15 years in China. Laya has also been focusing on OEM business, manufacturing and developing products such as automobile care product, personal care product, household chemical series, spray paint ,special industrial product, etc. And we can filling the products in your formulation or ours if you need. We have taken the lead in obtaining ISO9001 certification in China. Though Laya only focuses on manufacturing and OEM business, we have business partners who on the other hand focus on marketing and consumer sales networks. We are always looking for new technologies and products to strengthen our product ranges. I am really interested in your special product, which has very strong effectiveness but is also human and environmental friendly. I am writing to you, first of all, get some samples for further applications and trials. Secondly, discuss how we can do business together to make your product into Chinese market. We believe that with your high technologies and our local marketing advantages, we should be the very good business partners to enhance both your and our business.
For your convenience, you may contact me by e-mail: russ4781859@layachemical(dot)com
Thank you for your time and we look forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely, By the way ,in order to make a good opportunity for meeting people and professionals in the industry,LAYA has already scheduled B23--24,12 booths in the 2006 International Aerosol product and Technology Exhibition and International Metal cantainers Manufancturing Technology *域名隐藏* invite youe campany members to visit the exhibition ,talk over sincerely and exchange ideas. Best Regards
Russ
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旷文龙（RUSS）
GuangDong LAYA chemical CO.,LTD
ADD:Shunfeng Industrial Zone,Shunde
Foshan,Guangdong china
Tel:+86-757-22325992
Email:russ@layachemical(dot)com
MSN:russ4781859@hotmail(dot)com
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2楼 Pretti
等级:教授
发帖数:55
回帖数:7629
| 发帖时间 - 2006/8/3 12:16:31
| | ***次发信 越简单越好 只挑能吸引客户的说 目的就是吊住客人 让他注意到你 其他的都别说 别做公司介绍 别说客套话 别文绉绉 这些不光没有正面作用 还会有反作用 客户只有先发现你说的产品是他感兴趣的 才会想了解你们公司 想想你在街上遇到推销的人 心理活动是怎样的吧 我相信你这样的信 效果会很差很差的 不信你发１００封 看看回复情况吧
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3楼 russ110
等级:小学生
发帖数:5
回帖数:84
| 发帖时间 - 2006/8/3 12:22:58
| It was exciting to see your company’s products in the website . I got a great impact from your company. We are writing to enquire whether you would be willing to establish business relations with us.
We, Laya Chemical Co., Ltd., have been in the field of making aerosol cans and doing contract filling for near 15 years in China. Laya has also been focusing on OEM business, manufacturing and developing products such as automobile care product, personal care product, household chemical series, spray paint ,special industrial product, etc. And we can filling the products in your formulation or ours if you need. We have taken the lead in obtaining ISO9001 certification in China.
For your convenience, you may contact me by e-mail: russ4781859@yahoo(dot)com(dot)cn
Thank you for your time and we look forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely
改成这样子~谢谢P
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4楼 Pretti
等级:教授
发帖数:55
回帖数:7629
| 发帖时间 - 2006/8/3 13:03:00
| | 还是太多 我的建议： We produce automobile care product, personal care product, household chemical series, spray paint ,special industrial product . Check any similar need from your side ? Regards
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5楼 feellikefish
等级:高中生
发帖数:0
回帖数:275
| 发帖时间 - 2006/8/3 13:53:01
| 要是我是做采购的哪个人，看到这么长的一段东西，会晕的，更别说会留意什么了
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6楼 russ110
等级:小学生
发帖数:5
回帖数:84
| 发帖时间 - 2006/8/3 15:55:03
| 收到。。。
谢谢了~
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7楼 cocaice
等级:小学生
发帖数:2
回帖数:83
| 发帖时间 - 2006/8/3 16:00:38
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以下是引用Pretti在2006-8-3 13:03:00的发言：
还是太多 我的建议： We produce automobile care product, personal care product, household chemical series, spray paint ,special industrial product . Check any similar need from your side ? Rega
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会不会太短了？
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8楼 John Chen
等级:博士后
发帖数:198
回帖数:2630
| 发帖时间 - 2006/8/3 16:03:25
| 先做到语法规范,行文简洁,让客户看了后对你有信心.
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9楼 Pretti
等级:教授
发帖数:55
回帖数:7629
| 发帖时间 - 2006/8/3 16:14:32
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| 以下是引用cocaice在2006-8-3 16:00:38的发言： [QUOTE]以下是引用Pretti在2006-8-3 13:03:00的发言：
还是太多 我的建议： We produce automobile care product, personal care product, household chemical series, spray paint ,special
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我效果***的开发信就是： What are you dealing with now ? See if we can offer the same . Regards
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10楼 麦琪
等级:初中生
发帖数:12
回帖数:134
| 发帖时间 - 2006/8/3 16:19:51
| P的果然简短精悍!!
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